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Wednesday, January 25, 2017

COMPARISIONS

January 25, 2017

Make a comparison between Ollie's life, the life of the fish in the aquarium, and Melody's life.   Support your answer with specific details from the text.

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  3. January 25,2017 Ollie,the fish in the aquarium,and melody all share one thing they all can't talk they all must have millions of ideas but can't express them.

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  4. The comparison between Melody and her fish that they can't talk to people also same as the fish at the aquarium.

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  5. Melody, her fish, and the fish at the aquarium are all alike because they all have things to say but can't tell anybody. Another reason they are alike is they all wish they could be free and they are trying to escape.

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  6. January 25,2017
    She learned that not everyone at the aquarium has feelings because someone there was really rude to her about Rose wanting to go to the aquarium with Melody. Also she was sad because Rose was talking to Penny because Melody wanted to talk to her own sister so Melody got kind of jealous.

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  8. Melody is stuck stiff and compare to Ollie is free and can swim. Melody is just in a wheelchair all the time .

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  10. The fish in the aquarium has a lot of room to swim but Ollie only has a little space it his fish bowl.

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  11. Moldy is so smart.

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  12. How did you feel when you wrote this book about Melody and her and her family and a fish

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  13. Will Melody Be Will Be Able To Talk Without The Computer

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  14. Why is melody in a program that she dont whant to be in or go to

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  15. Why is Claire so jealous of Meolody and thinks she is so better than Meolody and the rest of her class mates.

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  16. Rose was acting like a mean PERSON melody is smart and sad at the same time so all i 'm trying to say that rose better get her life together and now that Mrs .v spent a lot of MONEY get her on the trip your book is GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!$

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  17. NICE BOOK!!!!

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  18. why does melody not want to be on the quiz team

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  19. does melody know how to do math

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  20. Melody Skipped Inclusion Classes To Study To Be On The Quiz Team And They Think She Doesn't Have The Smarts To Do It

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  21. How old is Melody?

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  22. Are you going to make another book like a part two to the book

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  23. I mean how old is Penny?

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  24. I think Melody will past the test.

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  25. Are you going to write another book like this one.

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  26. Is Melody going to a smart school after the school year?

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  27. How does Melody computer change her life,her outlook on life,and her potential?why does name it Elvira?

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  28. Why do they think Melody need to be on the quiz team

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  29. Have made other books like this

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  30. Did you write this book to help other people learn that disabled people can learn to?

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  31. My Frist Computer was when my dad went cristmas shopping then I said dad can you buy that computer then he said how much is it I said about 20 dallors he said get it and if it was not a computer it was my tablet.I was 9years old in the 4th grade and i was so happy i got a tablet for cristmas i was in detroit.

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  32. AmorionatT@ campus elmertyJanuary 26, 2017 at 1:34 PM

    Did you write book so people could now that disabled kids can learn to????

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  33. What made you start writing books and what made you write a book about a girl that can't move any of her body?

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  34. AmorionaT@ campus elmertyJanuary 26, 2017 at 1:38 PM

    YOUR BOOK IS GOOD DID EVER THINK WRITING ONE MORE BOOK ABOUT THIS ONE

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    1. Yeah your book is Great why don't you make another one like Out Of My Mind?

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    2. Does Melody win or quit before it starts

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  35. Mario,Rafael and David at Mulick ParkJanuary 26, 2017 at 2:26 PM

    Ollie the fish,the fish at the aquarium,and Melody are alike because none of them can tell people what they really feel like.In chapter 13,p.g.118,paragraph 6 it says "Inside,fish tanks go from floor to ceiling.I think of Ollie.He might have been happy here.In one tank sharks swim overhead,just like we're actually looking up from the ocean floor.Okay,so Ollie might not have been so happy in that tank." Melody is confined to her wheelchair just like they are confined to tanks.

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  36. Suhila and Araya at The Mulick ParkJanuary 26, 2017 at 2:29 PM

    In our opinion Ollie,the fish at the aquarium,and Melody's life are the same because they all are trapped in a little space. For example the fish in the aquarium, Ollie, and Melody can't express their feelings and they can not go any where. We know that because in chapter 8, on page 61 it says Melody actually thought Ollie's life was better than hers. Also, in chapter 13, pages 118, and 119 it talks about the different fish and Melody thinks Ollie would have been better there. This means all Melody, Ollie, and the fish from the aquarium have a lot of things in common.

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  37. Dayven and De'marcus and Mykayela and Kennedy@The Mulick ParkJanuary 26, 2017 at 2:32 PM

    Ollie's life is different from the fish in the aquarium and Melody's life because Ollie lived in a small bowl.The fish in the aquarium lives in a giant fish tank,and Melody is living her life in a wheelchair.This information is in paragraph 13.This means that three characters Ollie, the fish in the aquarium, and Melody have different things in their life,but they also have something in common .They lived their lives trapped.

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  38. i love this book can you wright a new one please

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  39. why did melody felt happy about her new computer is it because she have a computer that talks for her

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  40. why was Claire so jealous of melody when she got her computer

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  41. Rose Is Very Nice To Melody And Thats A True Friend To Stick Up For Melody

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  43. Why Do Claire And Molly Hate Melody

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  44. Well Ollie's life was so different because he was usually by himself and at the aquarium there was a bunch of little fish they were probably happier than Ollie.

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    2. I agree with you Lorena.

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  47. Melody think that rose is not her friend anymore with her. And rose is nice and wait be friend with melody.And rose is be her friend melody friend

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  48. Melody's life and Ollie's life are very similar. They are both stuck in one place and they both want to get out.Melody is trapped in a body that can't function right,and Ollie's stuck in a fish bowl where there's no way out.And that's how their lives are stuck in one place.

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    1. i agree with you

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    2. I like the way that you put it because it sounded polite.

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    3. I agree with yous Kloie. It makes sense.

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    4. I agree with you Kloie.

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  50. Tell me something you like about the book so far....

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    1. I like how Melody and Ollie`s life are stuck in something Ollie is stuck in a fish bowl and melody is stuck in a small body

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    2. Intresting so far

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    3. Its funny.The words it says "like step fart step fart."

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  51. Ollie can move around and swim, but Melody is stuck in a wheelchair wile not being able to move.

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  52. Both Ollie and Melody both Don't walk it says "I cant walk."On page 2.

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    1. What part do you think is intresting sam

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  54. Ollie was just a lonely fish swimming around in circles all day.The fish in the aquarium are put to great care because a lot of employees help them.Melody is stuck just stuck in her wheelchair and can't move can't talk can't really do anything.

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  55. A comparison between the aquarium fish and Ollie and Melody is that they all feel trapped.A way that they are different is that Ollie lived in a small fish bowl and Melody's wheelchair is her fish bowl and the aquarium fish are trapped in a big glass filled with water. A simile is that they all have a shark .Molly and Claire are Melody's sharks and the fish in the aquarium have real sharks and Ollie the fish has a shark named Melody because he probably thinks that she killed him.Those are some comparisons and differences.

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  57. I think that Ollie was alone in a bowl.If she was at aquarium with the with other fish.but then they will be trap still.







































































































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    2. I agree with you Delwin.

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  58. Melody and Ollie are a little the same.Because Ollie and Melody both can not talk and walk.And there both trapped Ollie is trapped in the fish bowl.Melody is trapped in her wheelchair.They both can't really do anything.

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    1. I agree with you Jeasy.

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    2. i agree also someone has to do it for them .

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    3. How are they diffrent

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    4. i agree also someone has to do it for them .

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  59. A comparison about them is that they all had to stay in one place at all times, and they were all having a hard life. One of the tanks had a mixture of fish including sharks and a comparison about that is that the other fish in that tank, Ollie, and Melody wouldn't want to be in that tank because they would all be eaten alive. Melody even said " Ollie might not have been so happy in that tank"

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  60. All three of them have similarities because there not able to a lot of things. All three of them are stuck in something. Melody is stuck in her wheel chair and Ollie used to be stuck in his bowl. And the fish in the aquarium are stuck in their tank. A difference is that Melody at least can go to different places. Another difference is that the fish in the aquarium are surrounded by fishes, and Melody isn't, neither was Ollie.

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  61. I think that Melody is the same as Ollie. because they both feel trapped. and they both can't talk. and can't go anywhere.

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  62. The similarities between Melody,Ollie, and the fish in the fish tank are that Melody has sharks in her life just like the fish in the fish tank. And Melody's sharks are Molly and Claire. And I also believe Melody,Ollie,and the fish in that fish tank all feel trapped because Melody is trapped in her wheel chair and Ollie and the fish are both trapped in fish tanks. Also Melody and the fish tank both have other people or fish,but Ollie had nobody which I think could be one reason he jumped out the fish bowl. And some differences are that the people around Melody help her not like the fish and the sharks. And I think that's why Melody changed her mind quickly when she saw the sharks and said Ollie would like it there. And those are some similarities and differences between Melody,Ollie,and the fish in the fish tank.

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    1. I agree with you Keanna. I like yours.

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  63. Ollie's life is in a bowl and melody's life is in a wheel chair they both feel that they are trap and they can't move. they like in a aquarium.

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  64. Ollie's life is different from the fish that is in the aquarium and Melody's is more different from Ollie and the fish in the aquarium

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    1. i think the same

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    2. How are they different?

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    3. well you have to put a different thing about it but i agree

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  65. Ollie would have liked a bigger tank in the aquarium but not the one with the sharks.just like Melody she wants the normal human functions so she could walk and talk.And Ollie jumped out of the fishbowl because he did not want to be in the tiny fishbowl,if Melody were a fish she would have done the same thing.

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  66. They all feel trapped the fish in the Aquarium they are struck in a. Big tank and with other fishes but, for Ollie has to stay in a small tank by her self . Then she diced to jump out and be free and be with others fishes melody was trapped in a chair and she wishes that she doesn't have to be in a that chair.The Aquarium fishes to be with others but with Ollie she has no one to be with.

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  67. Ollie's life is in a bowl and melody's life is in a wheel chair they both feel that they are trap and they can't move. they like in a aquarium.

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    1. I agree with you Kirvin by the way I like yours.

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  69. There are all kinds of fishes it is kinds like spikes,and it look like they is painted. Penny slaps the tank every time fishes come more fishes "Penny" said as Ms.V was writing down every fish and takes pictures but Ollie is just like he is trapped in that tank and Melody fells like she cant do anything she feels like she is not special anyway she had felt sad. That"s why I think that melody is like Ollie, and the fishes

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    1. i agree with you Imonie

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    2. I think yours is nice Imonie. I agree with you.

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    3. I also think it is nice

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  70. I can compare Melody's life to the other fish in the aquarium because Melody is stuck in a wheel chair and the other fish are stuck in a aquarium. but Ollie is diffrent because Ollie is in a little fish bowl by her/his self and she dose not have other fish around her but the fish at the aquarium have fish around them.Melody and Ollie are alike because they both can go places but Melody haves to stay in a wheel chair and Ollie haves to stay in a fish bowl.

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    1. I agree with yours Angelina.

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    2. I agree with you too.

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    3. yeah your right there is more fish in the aquarium then the bowl.

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    4. I agree because they are all stuck in some way.

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    5. I agree and I like the way that you put it.

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  71. Friends are not always going to act like they always do for example Rose was really nice with Melody when she first entered music class is stuck just stuck in her wheelchair and can't move can't talk can't really do anything.

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  72. just like Ollie melody used to be lonely.But not any more she is friends with so many more people.she feels like shes in the tank with every other fish even with the sharks.Those sharks are Molly and Claire.Because they trying to frame her that she is cheating,and are being quite rude to her.

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  73. Melody and the aquarium fish and Ollie are the same because they all don't walk or talk.Their all different because they all don't have the same space.Some have more space then others.But the aquarium fish have the most space Ollie can move more than Melody And Melody is stuck in a wheelchair.

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  74. Ollie's life was lonely because she didn't have no fish friends.And she could't move that much,but if she was in the aquarium she could move alot more and wouldn't jump out and die and that's how how Ollie's life would have been if she was at the aquarium.

    Melody's life would like this,Melody is the fish and Rose is turning into a shark and Melody can't move that much so she is small so she hides in small places that Rose the shark can't get her.And Rose is the shark because Rose turned on Melody and is being mean to her.

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    1. She not really being mean to her.

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    2. I think yours is nice Tyree.

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  75. Melody is saying that maybe ollie would've been happy because back then he was just swimming in circle and would've been happy in bigger place.

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  77. They are all the same because they are all stuck.The fish are stuck in their tanks ,and Melody is stuck in her wheel chair.Melody said "Ollie would of loved it there".But there are people that are not very nice the tank and in the real world .Ollie would of liked the tank because he would have fish friends.But he would of not liked it because there would be sharks that would act like the not very nice people.But he would still be stuck in a tank.Melody has tons of people around her.But still has people that are not very nice to her ,and Ollie had nobody.That is why Ollie would and would not like to be in the aquarium.Those are the comparisons between the aquarium ,Melody,and Ollie.

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    1. I agree and I also like the way that you put it.

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    2. I like what you wrote Mariosl

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    3. I agree with you Marisol i like your begging middle and ending

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  78. Well Ollie's life is like the aquarium fish,because he feel trapped.So does Melody,The difference between Ollie and the aquarium fish,and Melody.They are different because Ollie was trapped in a tiny fish bowl,And Melody was trapped in her wheelchair,but she could go anywhere but can do anything by herself.And the aquarium fish is different and trapped by them having a large tank,but can't go anywhere but can do anything.there similar together by being trapped and not do anything but going anywhere...that's the comparison of Ollie,Melody,and the aquarium fish!!!

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  79. how they are alike because all of them trapped.they are all alike because they all dont want to be in the fish tanks because the sharks and they all can get eating alive.how they are different because ollie lives in a fish bowl where nobody around are in the tank with him.melody go to places in the tank they lives with sharks and they can get eating alive.how they differnt because ollie is died and melody and the fish in the aquarinm didnt die. how they are the same because all of them have a hard life.

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  80. i compare Ollie the fish and Melody they both cant walk Melody can talk but Ollie cant talk

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  81. Her are some comparison's about Ollie and Melody. THey body with they weren't stuck in one place as in,Melody is stuck in a body that doesn't function properly. And Ollie's stuck in a fish bowl with no possible way out. And there's some difference's too. As in Ollie probably thinks Melody is the enemy now because she killed him but didn't mean too. Plus Ollie would of been better off at the aquarium because the fish there get better care and have a bigger tank.And Ollie only gets like a 5 inch tank.

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  82. melody was in a wheelchair and ollie is in a bowl they both have to live something for the rest if there life. And they both cant do nothing about. But ollie took a rest and jump out the fish bowl and Melody cant take a rest

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  83. When Ollie was still alive they should go to the aqarme
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  84. Melody said Ollie would like to be in that tank with that shark because sharks are bullies.Ollie and the other fish are like Melody because someone has to feed them and clean them.

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  85. Why did Clarie through up on Mr.dimming's shoes

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  86. Ollie want to get out of his fish bowl and Melody want to get out of her wheel chair. Other thing is that Ollie cant talk and Melody too.

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