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Friday, January 6, 2017

FEELINGS OVER OLLIE

January 6, 2017

Describe Melody's feelings when she is unable to tell her mother what really happened to Ollie?

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  1. Mia at The Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:33 PM

    Melody's feelings when she was unable to tell her mother what really happened to Ollie was that she was sad,mad and wished that she could tell her mom what really happened.I know this because in paragraph 8 on page 63 and 64.This means that she also was irritated and wish her mom had went there sooner.

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  2. Mario and David at Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:34 PM

    I think Melody felt mad about not being able to tell her mom about it not being her fault that Ollie died. It says it on p.g. 64 paragraph 5 "I was angry that I couldn't tell her what really happened". This means Melody was mad at her mom for being slow, and not being able to tell her mom the truth.

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  3. Saniyah and Taraji at The Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:40 PM

    I think Melody feels sad,and mad that she is unable to tell her mother what really happened to Ollie.It says it on chapter 8,page 63 and 64,paragraph 3 and 5,sentence 3 and sentence 5.I know she was sad because she said I didn't want her to see me cry.That means she was feeling sad and she wanted to cry.She was mad because her mom think that she killed the fish on purpose. When Melody was trying to get her moms attention she was kicking,because she really tried to save Ollie's life.That means Melody has more than one feeling about not being able to tell her mother about what really happened.

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  4. how old are you?

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  5. Charleigh and Mykayela at the Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:52 PM

    I think Melody felt mad and sad because she could not tell her mom the truth about how she was trying to save Ollie. I found my answer on page 64 paragraph 5. This means Melody wished she could tell her mom what really happened,and how Ollie jumped out of his bowl.

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  6. Anaya at The Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:54 PM

    Melody felt sad and mad when she heard Ollie did not make it ,and her mom thought she killed him. I know that because on page 64, paragraph 4, sentence 4, 5, and 6, it says "She was angry, and I was too. If she hadn't been so slow, Ollie might have made it. I did not want her to see me cry.This means that Melody had these feelings and emotions about Ollie and her mom.

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  7. Marshae and Amayia at The Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 1:56 PM

    We think Melody was feeling mad because her mom thought that she killed Ollie the fish but, really Melody was trying to save Ollie.We think Melody was feeling mad because, when her mom said "Melody what have you done?Why did you knock over the fish bowl?Don't you now fish can't live without water?"
    We know this because we found it in the 8th chapter page 63 paragraph page 2.This means that Melody was frustrated about not being able to express herself.

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  8. Vanessa and Kennedy at The Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 2:14 PM

    When Melody was unable to tell her mom what happened to Ollie she felt sad and mad because the fish died and if her mom hadn't been so slow to grab water then the fish wouldn't of died. On chapter 8 page 64 it said if mom wasn't so slow,Ollie might have mad it. that means Melody was sad and mad.

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  9. Brenden at the Mulick ParkJanuary 6, 2017 at 2:17 PM

    I think when Melody couldn't tell her mother what happened to Ollie she felt upset and angry. It would probably be hard to not speak to your mom. Melody probably feels lonely because she cant talk. She has to use a board to talk.I got my information from page 63 paragraph 3








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    1. in think that melody felt sad and mad, because her fish died and she was blamed for it.

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    2. I do too

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    3. Melody might have felt upset because when she got blamed for it she didn't have in excuse for what the fish has done. So when melody's mom came and said what happen to the fish melody wasn't able to say anything so the mom just blamed it on melody because she is known for spilling things because in previous times the mother thought melody did it but since melody cannot speak the mother just assumed that melody did it so in melody's mind she's thinking I did not do anything but mother thought she did.

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    4. I agree with you because Melody couldn't talk.And I also liked how you gave where in the book you found it.
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  10. I think Melody felt sad because Ollie die and her mother seen that Ollie was died.

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    1. I think Melody felt sad because Ollie died and her mother seen that Ollie was died.

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    2. and she blamed it on melody

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    3. TechTeacher@ShawmutJanuary 9, 2017 at 2:50 PM

      Please write your thoughts in complete sentences. You have great thoughts, let's hear them!!

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    4. i agree with Gynevieve@shawmuthills because i think that melody was upset too

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  11. Gynevieve @ Shawmut HillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 11:11 AM

    Melody was probably really upset because she couldn't tell her mother that she was trying to save the fish instead of her mom thinking she tipped the fish bowl. It wasn't her fault Ollie Jumped out he felt trapped too!

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    1. I agree because she couldn't say "Mom I was trying to save him'' Also in my head i thought she looked sad

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    2. Arianna@Shawmut HillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 11:20 AM

      I agree with you Gynevieve that Melody was probably realy realy upset because she couldn't tell her mother that ollie jumped out of his boll

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    3. I agree because when melody's mom thought she tipped over the fish bowl. Melody wasn't able to tell her mother that she didn't tip over the fish bowl. So when Melody's mother thought she tipped the fish bowl she got blamed because her mother remembers from the past that when she is either getting fed or something else. That she is known for spilling things so that is why I agree with that answer.

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    4. Jerell@ShawmutHillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 2:59 PM

      I like what you said Marshaun.

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    5. i like your answer

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    6. Yea,and if she could've talked to her mother and walk she wouldn't have got blamed for what she did.
      Julius@Pickens

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  12. I think she was sad because she was blamed for killing the poor fish and he jumped out of the fish bowl

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    1. Arianna@Shawmut HillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 11:26 AM

      I think you are right that melody had got blamed on for something she didn't do.

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    2. I like what you said Arianna.

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    3. I totally agree with you guys she has got blammed for a lot of thing she didn't even do

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    4. I agree and if she could talk she wouldn't of got blamed for what she did.

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  13. Arianna@Shawmut HillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 11:31 AM

    I would give melody a thumbs up for what she was trying to do.

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    1. Ya she deserved the thumbs up because she tried to save the fish from dieing.

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    2. I agree she should even know she failed to save Ollie she deserves a thumbs up and she if she could talk this is probably what she would say,"I didn't mean to I just tried to save him from dying and Ollie jumped out the fish bowl if I could walk I could of saved him but I couldn't,because I can't walk." Julius@Sherwood

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  14. Her mother can`t really tell because Melody didn`t talk and when Ollie fell out of the fishbowl her mother thought that she knocked over the fishbowl on purpose because Melody wasn`t talking.-Aniya Coit Creative Academy Arts

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    1. Gynevieve @ Shawmut HillsJanuary 9, 2017 at 2:56 PM

      I agree with you, but melody couldn't have talked to her mom.

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  15. She felt sorry that that her fish try to kill it self , and she tried to stop it so she tried to grab the bowl to put water on the fish but the bowl just fell on the floor and cracked and hear mom came in and said what did you do.

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    1. I agree with you because . When she tried to put the fish back in the bowl then it fell and cracked . When melody's mother came in the bowl was cracked next to her and that's what made her mom get mad at her.

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    2. nazaria@shawmuthillsJanuary 10, 2017 at 10:49 AM

      i agree because when she tryed to put him bach in the fish bowl she could not grab the bowl but when she grabed the bowl with her finger tips the bowl fell on the ground and all the water came out

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  16. Melody felt the life of Ollie because . the fish couldn't talk neither.

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    1. Either could her and she was sad because she couldn't tell her mother what really happen and she fells bad about what really happen
      Julius@Sherwood

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    2. Melody felt really disappointed because Ollie had jumped out of the fish bowl and she couldn't tell her mom because her mother didn't come right away, but then her mother came to come help the fish and put it back inside the fish bowl and later that day the fish had died.

      Dlilah@ sherwood park

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    3. I agree with you Julius

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    4. I disagree with you Julius

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  17. melody feels like shes in a fish bowl and she cant talk to tell her mother what really happened to Ollie

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    1. It was it her falt Ollie jume out of the bloe

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    2. Why do you think it was Melody fault that the fish jumped out the bowl.
      Khalil@Sherwood

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  18. melody saw ollie jump out of the bowl melody tried to save ollie by splashing some water on him so he can breath but whean melodys mom cam in her mom freakt out becuase ollie was dead

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    1. that was good whoever wright that,anyway melody feels sad about her fish deaded caz, ollie jumped out of bowl then she tip the bowl.It fell on her ,her mom saw the water on her and ollie was on the floor.

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  19. She felt sad because she couldn't tell her mom that Ollie had jumped out of the bowl, and that she hadn't poured Ollie out of his bowl.
    Alex@Sherwood

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    1. sorry don't agree

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    2. sorry but i don't agree
      Gabe@sherwood

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    3. I don't agree because in the story it didn't show that she felt sad at all.
      Jennifer@Sherwood

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  20. Melody felt sad because if she could of spoken she would of told her mom and Ollie would of still been alive.But since she couldn't talk Ollie then died and maybe she thinks its all her fault.
    Alejandro@Sherwood

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    1. Yeah, nice job! Sad is the answer how Melody felt. I agree.

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  21. Melody was very upset that she could not tell her mom what happend to Ollie, I know this, because in the story when Ollie jumped out of his fish bowl she was trying to make a whole lot of noise, so her mother can hear to come down stairs from all the ruckous.
    DIAMOND@SHERWOOD

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    1. Yup, I agree because Melody couldn't explain her which also made her sad

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  22. In my opinion I think Melody felt sad when she couldn't tell her mom what really happen , because her mom was disappointed in her , because she thought Melody tipped over the bowl , but what really happened was that , Ollie jumped out of his bowl , and couldn't breath.
    Khalil@Sherwood

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    1. i agree Melody mom needs to chill

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    2. I agree because Ollie jumped out of his bowl because he lost control, And I like how you used in my opinion! Nice job.

      Miriam@Sherwood

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  23. Melody saw Ollie jump out the bowl and she tried to save Ollie by splashing the bowl of water on him so he can breath and survive before he died, she tried and tried but he died and she was calling her mom by screaming, but she didn't come up stairs asap because she couldn't hear or just didn't listen to her. Then Melody screamed and screamed then her mom came down stairs and it was wrecked so she got mad at Melody and I bet she felt so,so sad. I feel really,really bad for her.
    Marc@Sherwood

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  24. At first Melody was confused because why her mom didn't know why she was screeching. She knew it was too late because the water had to be the right temperature, not just stink water because it is going to be too cold and too hot.
    Jennifer@Sherwood

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    1. You didn't really make since and some stuff that you since didn't even happen

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    2. the water temperature had nothing to do with the fish. Sorry but I don't agree
      Alex@Sherwood

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  25. Melody probably felt like that is unfair for her to try to save ollie but she still gets excused of killing the fish.I felt that it was unfair for her mom to excuse her and how she got mad at Melody when she can't use her hands,well i guess a little but if she still she can't really control it and if she can't control it then she might tip something or break something but you need to remember she is not good at using her hands,arms,legs so her mom doesn't need to blow a fuse.
    Gabe@sherwood

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  26. Melody felt inside like why did she think id been screeching and calling for her. in Melody in her mind she was thinking why would you do that to a poor little fish he was happy in his little world.and that mean she might feel sad because she cant tell her mom what real happen with the fish.
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  27. Melody was feeling sad and angry at the same time. I think think that she might have been sad because of when Ollie jumped out of his fish bowl. Melody tried to save him by screaming for help but her mom or no one else came.So Melody took it into her own hands and tried moving the fish bowl to get water on Ollie to save him but it didn't work and he died.I think that Melody was mad because she couldn't get help and Ollie died but also because her mom took the anger out on Melody even though it wasn't her fault.
    Aniya B@sherwood

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  28. melody was sad because her pet fish Ollie jumped out of the fish bowl after jumping out of the bowl then her mom came in and she was disappointed at what she thought melody did but never did it

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    1. I agree,I also think that she was really upset and tried her hardest to get her mom.

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  29. nazaria@shawmuthillsJanuary 10, 2017 at 10:42 AM

    I think melody fells bad because she was sad she could not tell her mom that she tryed to save ollie. she tryed to tell her mom that ollie jumped out of the fish bowl.

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  30. I think that Melody was feeling angry that she couldn't tell her mom the the fish jumped out of the bowl, and then Melody dumped the water out because she thought that it would save the fish from dying. I also think that she was mad at herself because she couldn't scoop the fish back up and put it back in the water to survive. She wished that she was different so she could speak to her mom, and tell her what really happened with Ollie jumping out of the bowl and Melody got in trouble for trying to help (she was trying to help by dumping the water out,but that made even more of a scene that made it look like her fault just by trying to help but she couldn't really explain it to her mom).

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    1. I agree,melody was just trying to help and she tipped the bowl over and her mom just took her anger out on melody.

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  31. I think that melody felt angry that she could not tell her mom that Ollie jumped out and I think she was also sad when she herd that Ollie didn't make it and she tried so hard to keep him alive she tried screaming for her mom and she even tipped the bowl over so he could breath but then when her mom saw that the fish bowl was knocked over her mom thought that she killed him by doing that but her mom took her anger out on melody when melody did not do anything wrong she was trying to help.

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  32. I think Melody was angry since she tried to save Ollie but she couldn't tell her mom that.

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  33. i think that too she can not say it but she wants to.

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  34. I thing Melody was feeling sad because she could not talk to tell her mom what happen to the fish and her mom would be feeling sad to because that fish was a gift to Melody and Melody really liked that fish a lot.

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  35. mlody trid to help with olei.

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    1. You spell melody like this and it's tried not trid also you spell ollie like this

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  36. She is mad because she really loved Ollie and she tried to help him because he jumped out of his fish bowl and she didn't know what to do.

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  37. she was sad beacause when she tried to save ollie she couldnt and she was mad beacause her mom yelled at her AND SHE WAS JUST TRYING TO SAVE HIM

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    1. I agree because she was trying to save him NOT kill him.

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  38. She was frustrated and mad because she couldnt explain to her mom wath had happend

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  39. she was tried to save ollie her mom yelled at he

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  40. Disappointed and guilty. Coit

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  41. She is mad cause she cant talk to people about whats actually going on.And she is disappointing in her mom for not believing her but its not her mom's fault that she doesn't know whats going on.and she just assumed. that it was melody cause she was the closest

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  42. I wish that molldy Could talk so she could warn her mother. Nas form Coit ❤️

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    1. i know right but what i dont know is why they would blame it on her

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  43. Melody is sad because she wanted to tell her mother what really happened.She did NOT knock the bowl over ollie jumped out of the bowl because he wanted freedom like Melody.

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  44. i dont think that melody killed ollie because if she cant hurt a fly so what makes you think that she would kill olli anyway melody would not kill olli

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  45. I think melody is sad and mad because she cannot tell her mom what happen to olli

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  46. She felt sad and mad because if she could of talked and moved she could of saved his life.

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  47. Melody feels angry when she cant tell her mom what really happened to Ollie. She wants to tell her mom that Ollie actually jumped out of the bowl and that she tried to put him back in the bowl but since she couldn't move her hands she couldn't put him back in the bowl. She also wanted to yell and tell her mom to come up the stairs because Ollie jumped out of the bowl but she can't talk so she couldn't say anything. Then her mom blamed her for Ollie's death when she wanted to help but she couldn't. That is why she was angry when she couldn't do anything.

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  48. What gave you the idea to write this book?

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  49. why was rose worried that clear and molly was go tease her for being with melody at the aquarium is it because rose think that if she hang around with melody or she fell bad

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  50. do you know somebody who is like melody because melody is a smart intellgant little girl so that is what i want to know please reply back anybody

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  51. Does Elvera ever get broke in the book or messed up

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  52. Melody felt mad because she can't talk to her mom and tell her about it.

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  53. i think she really loved ollie cause there some thing in common with and Ollie like the both cant talk and other stuff

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